The second draft of the design, with the additional detail of the planet and shooting star removed to create an 'empty' sky. In a group peer critique the design was received with positive feedback. The majority of the group favoured preference for this design over the first. It was stated that although it was much a simpler design, the concept was a lot stronger and allowed a greater sense of freedom for the user. It was felt that the concept created a unique alternative to the standard responses to this brief and would create a positive space where users could express themselves.
This design was submitted to the competition but is still awaiting a response.