OUGD503 - Studio Brief 01 - YSS First Submission

Both the initial and secondary designs were submitted to the Student's Union for inclusion within the competition. After three days feedback was received:

Hi Erin,

Thank you so much for submitting a design for the YSS brief.

We have two designs we are considering between, and we wanted to give both designers the opportunity to make a few adjustments before we decide. We have a list of things we would be interested in seeing with your design, if you would like you can make a few edits and send it back over as soon as possible.

We would like to see:

• The colours being more primary, 
• A specific visual cue that relates to the message, instead of the more abstract circles or hazy lines
• We prefer the more obvious central text on the circle poster of - LCA life is __________

If you have any questions, please let me know! After we receive both designs, we will let you know if we are going ahead with you design.

Thank you,

Kaitlyn, Emma & Adam