Following on from the feedback given in the initial critique, almost all of the design work for the newspaper was changed. The design was remade to allow for a more simplistic layout featuring overlapping text and images, which reflects the modern and progressive nature of Paris as it stands today.
The focus of the newspaper became about the letterforms as a series of shapes. Each letter was designed as an outline to highlight the individual shapes and also to reflect the nature of the underground metro maps. Also included in the re-design are photographs of the station, as it was suggested that although the newspaper will be distributed on the station, if the newspaper were to travel to other areas of the city via people or the metro, a visual signifier of the originating station would draw in potential new readers. Also, photographs are more recognisably synonymous with newspapers than a cartoon illustration, further contextualising the publication.
